From: "Patty and Mike Finan" To: "Clemco" Subject: last of changes to ph brochure Date: Wed, 27 Jun 2007 08:50:48 -0400 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="----=_NextPart_000_000F_01C7B898.41B88520" X-Priority: 3 X-MSMail-Priority: Normal X-Mailer: Microsoft Outlook Express 5.50.4133.2400 X-MimeOLE: Produced By Microsoft MimeOLE V5.50.4133.2400 This is a multi-part message in MIME format. ------=_NextPart_000_000F_01C7B898.41B88520 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="iso-8859-1" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Hi there, I finally had my English teacher friend review the brochure and here are = her findings: In the Port Hope History section: put a hyphen between forty and acre so it reads forty-acre parcels in the bottom section, it should read: Port Hope survived the 1871 fire = and was able to return to lumbering, but after the second fire in 1881 = the trees were gone, and farming became the focus.=20 (The placement of the commas were the only changes here) On the Port Hope area side, the only change is in the last paragraph. = Please make it "Port Hope is the perfect place for a summer home and = it's only two and a half short hours from Detroit and one and a half = hours from Port Huron". (take out the "we are") That's it! I'd like to get this to Lansing asap so we can get our = commodity code assigned and get them printed. Could you mail me a blue = copy and I'll send it on to Lansing?=20 Thanks!!! Patty Finan Huron City Museums 7995 Pioneer Drive Port Austin MI 48467 989 738-6007 cell 989 670-8196 www.HuronCityMuseums.org ------=_NextPart_000_000F_01C7B898.41B88520 Content-Type: text/html; charset="iso-8859-1" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable
Hi there,
 
I finally had my English teacher friend = review the=20 brochure and here are her findings:
 
In the Port Hope History = section:
 
put a hyphen between forty and = acre so it=20 reads forty-acre parcels
 
in the bottom section, it should read: = Port Hope=20 survived the 1871 fire and was able to return to lumbering, but after = the second=20 fire in 1881 the trees were gone, and farming became the focus. =
(The placement of the commas were the = only changes=20 here)
 
On the Port Hope area side, the only = change is in=20 the last paragraph. Please make it "Port Hope is the perfect place for=20 a summer home and it's only two and a half short hours from Detroit = and one=20 and a half hours from Port Huron". (take out the "we are")
 
That's it! I'd like to get this to = Lansing asap so=20 we can get our commodity code assigned and get them printed. Could you = mail me a=20 blue copy and I'll send it on to Lansing?
 
Thanks!!!
Patty Finan
Huron City = Museums
7995 Pioneer=20 Drive
Port Austin MI 48467
989 738-6007  cell 989 = 670-8196
www.HuronCityMuseums.org
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